I really like the bassline in the beginning. However, the buildup to the melody sounds rather repetitive, even with the layers adding on. The melody's not bad- I would be impressed if you developed a fitting counter melody to work with it. I feel like the bassline gets lost when the melody moves in. The harmony's a little dull- maybe change harmonic interval at one point? I don't know...
Man, I really liked that bassline.
ill try to take into account as many suggestions as you brought up. ill make sure to make the bassline stand out a bit more amd ill try to incorperatr a counter melody. ill also try to make the buildup a little less repetitive. thanks for the review :)
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